Feedback Response

After presenting our pitch, we decided to hand out feedback forms to our audience. From the results we have received advice, which we will be considering. The majority of the suggestions were to do with the age of the actor we will get to play the lead singer in our music video.

The suggestions we received mostly said that we needed an older actor to play the role. Because we are still going to use an actor who is quite young we are going to edit the plot slightly so that it works with a younger actor.

Our plan is to use an actor who is 18 years old to play the protagonist. This will emphasise the danger of him gambling away his money, because the people he is gambling with will be much older than him. It will show the audience how the main character has mixed with some dangerous people, but must continue the risk because he is in debt. The story of the music video is that the protagonist has no choice but to try and gamble this money to get out of his high gambling debt. This is a secret from he is keeping from his family, because he is putting them at risk by betting their money, and because if he cannot pay his debts there will be harsh consequences.